Friday, May 02, 2008
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i was born & raised in central illinois,
educated in missouri & denmark.
i photograph & document my surroundings,
with a passion for eating & cooking.
portfolio website.
contact me // anjali.m.pinto@gmail.com
educated in missouri & denmark.
i photograph & document my surroundings,
with a passion for eating & cooking.
portfolio website.
contact me // anjali.m.pinto@gmail.com
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6 comments:
awesome draft, girl! and you even worked in the photo i didn't like in a way that made me okay with it - great transition image! also, the ending is wonderful. great job not victimizing/pitying her, which could have been an easy mistake to make. i'm not sure that the opening quote connects to the rest of the piece, though. i know the back story and deeper meaning of it, but think it sets up something that she doesn't end up talking about. does that make sense? otherwise, i saw only a few volume issues on the audio and some image pacing in the middle. still, it's a damn good piece.
-p
was this all done in one day? i mean the audio gathering and the stills? pretty good job, actually, very good job. im impressed. there were a few audio issues but all in all, looks pretty sweet.
All of the stills were taken in one day, the audio recorded a week later. There are some issues with the audio but, I did the best I could with the mistakes I had made.
Bravo!
Beautiful stuff doggie.
This is great!!!! I love how everything fit so well together. Keep up the great work!
it's a great beginning. i really dig the photography, really. But the audio is lacking something....B roll? Could you go back and get some ambient noise. I don't know what, but you'd be surprised. Also, think about getting about 20-30 sec shorter. Then, it'll real nice. word.
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